In writing we were writing about a picture it was about canoe riders.The canoe cuts through the fog slowly in the swamp.
The girl in the pink is swaying her fingers through the water.They can see the dark and creepy swamp. They can look at the white fog. They spy on the tree because it might break and fall onto them. Maybe they can see alligators and come up to them. They can see dead birds in the swamp.
The smell of the stinky vegetation mingles with the dampness of the murky water to create a setting. They can smell the yucky swamp.They can smell the jungle. The animals that live in the jungle and poop the people and can smell it.
If there were alligators they would hear them. They can hear people talking. They can hear the animals making noise and the birds chirping. They can hear the wind and the wind making the trees move.
They finally finished there trip on the boat so now they can go on land.
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