In writing we did persuading about x-ray vision is better than super sonic hearing.Something that was challenging it we had to research a little bit of more ideas to write.Something i enjoyed was when i said in my writing you can help the hospital and make sure germs don't get you.
Here is my writing, Bye!!!
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hi my name is Toi from south hornby school.i liked the part when you could wipe out the germs and i was really interested in your blog because you added lots of different ideas.
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toi thank you for your comment, but make some commas when you publish your comments because i read it without breathing.
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