This comic book is about ' what do you want to become when your older '.
I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. My teacher is Miss McLeod. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Thursday, April 16, 2020
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
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ReplyDeleteI enjoyed reading your comic. The conversation flows well between your two characters.
ReplyDeleteNext time, think about your and you're. Your for your hat, etc. You're for you are. So "What are you going to do when you're older?"
This comic animation is something I still need to learn how to do.
Thank you for your comment and i forgot about your and you're
DeleteHi Eligh, what a great comic, how did you make it?
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