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Monday, June 3, 2019

Describe a moment in time

We have been learning describe a moment in time.
We had to do a hook and a




The riders are scciding down the hills.The rider is holding on so
tiet because he might fall down? The riders can smell and tasted the
dirt and the swet.They might be thinking it is going to rain.The riders
a having a race and the blue one is going to win they think.The rider
with the red motorbike feels nervous because he thinks the other
riders a going to catch up to him. “Crashed” landed the awesome
red motorbike!
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3 comments:

  1. AnonymousJune 5, 2019 at 4:45 PM

    nnoo

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  2. AnonymousJune 5, 2019 at 4:45 PM

    you did

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  3. Mrs SSeptember 22, 2019 at 6:27 PM

    I really liked the sentence where you said "The riders can smell and tasted the
    dirt and the swet." It really made me feel like I was there. Good job.

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